11-09-2018, 09:43 PM
Hi Leanne,
Thanks for your comment. I'm quite surprised by all the layers, because I have only one in mind! Greg has been prescribed a specific type of medication and it alters his mind. I've been on it too. Do you think I should include it in the poem, or is it better to let people interpret based on their own knowledge and/or experience?
I agree completely with your description of humans, and I enjoyed reading your thoughts on the dolls. The grebe is serenity :>)
Best wishes,
Ally
Thanks for your comment. I'm quite surprised by all the layers, because I have only one in mind! Greg has been prescribed a specific type of medication and it alters his mind. I've been on it too. Do you think I should include it in the poem, or is it better to let people interpret based on their own knowledge and/or experience?
I agree completely with your description of humans, and I enjoyed reading your thoughts on the dolls. The grebe is serenity :>)
Best wishes,
Ally
Please note, I'm away at the moment because my partner is unwell and he requires a little extra TLC.


