Edit3 - To the Limits of Vision

[billy]

i really like it as a toast, i'd really love it if you could extend it by three or more stanza. i get the fell earthquakes line it just reads a little awkward for me. a [that] would be the only suggestion i can give. other than that it read well for me oops, i'm crap at punctuation but i think an odd comma after [and] could be used better after [us] but what do i know

To the Limits of Vision


Here's to the God-granted limits of vision
that spare us all sight of hairy dust mites,
fell earthquakes aborning in strata beneath us
and, greatest of mercies, our fellow-men’s souls.

In the nature of a toast.  Posted here rather than short form or for-fun to see how our fine crop of critics can improve it.