rock heart

[Richard]

Hey cloud,
I think you have some nice imagery within the poem. However, I wonder if you could incorporate the title more. I do have some suggestions below:

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a gentle stream
softly crumbles -What if you start with this line, so it could refer to the rock heart? Maybe even cut the first line?
by resting shores

where all rivers arc -If you took my advice from above, then I would also suggest cutting "where" from this line.
in seamless flow
lay the sea; soaring 

waves crest
above morning clouds
falling
like a silent drop -I like this ending, but agree with billy's suggestion to change it to "like silent drops"

by resting shores,
a gentle stream
softly crumbles
where all rivers arc
in seamless flow

^OG

I look forward to seeing where you take this from here.

Thanks for the read,
Richard