rock heart
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Hi cloud,

I'm commenting on Edit 1.589 :-)

I like the streams, rivers, sea. I'm a bit stuck on 'lay', though, as I expected something like 'towards'. I think there's a movement towards the sea, but I might have missed the meaning (if so, sorry!).

Best wishes,
Ally
Please note, I'm away at the moment because my partner is unwell and he requires a little extra TLC.
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Messages In This Thread
rock heart - by cloud - 10-29-2018, 02:12 PM
RE: rock heart - by billy - 10-29-2018, 02:21 PM
RE: rock heart - by cloud - 10-29-2018, 08:29 PM
RE: rock heart - by Ally - 10-31-2018, 04:14 AM
RE: rock heart - by billy - 10-31-2018, 12:25 PM
RE: rock heart - by cloud - 11-01-2018, 02:30 AM
RE: rock heart - by billy - 11-03-2018, 11:19 AM
RE: rock heart - by Ally - 11-01-2018, 04:10 AM
RE: rock heart - by Richard - 11-02-2018, 01:21 PM
RE: rock heart - by cloud - 11-03-2018, 06:54 AM
RE: rock heart - by Ally - 11-12-2018, 04:08 AM
RE: rock heart - by pigpoem - 12-12-2018, 05:20 PM
RE: rock heart - by JkArcher - 02-14-2019, 08:04 PM
RE: rock heart - by ginaparaoan - 03-04-2019, 10:39 AM



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