Greg's grebe (v.g)

[billy]

hi ally, good to see your poetry.

at first glance i was expecting a sex poem i actually thought "has he used viagra" barring the first stanza you have some great images in there. it captures a moment of nature and makes me the reader feel warmer.

Throughout high dosage,
his subject was
sexual conquests –
 
miles-long displays of paper dolls,
explicitly coloured,
arms joined. lovely image
 
But as medium ground approached, no need for but
the lines began to dwindle could this couplet be another image. ?
 
and today,
at just 5 milligrams,
he presents a grebe –
 
a single little grebe,
making its way a little weak, a suggstion would be bobbing or another word
across a lake,
paddling smoothly
through the clouds. this is also a great image of a reflection.