Gone (Revision)

[Todd]

The other revision is going up now. I feel good about some of the changes in the opening part. I'm experimenting with the white space around the hours line. Maybe a stanza break is enough, but I wanted to set it apart for more passage of time and the starkness of it. I'm not sure how I feel about the revised ending. I may have been too pat in the original so I'm trying it. I considered everyone's comments and may apply different ones during the process.

Thank you, all.