10-27-2018, 03:29 AM
You're welcome, billy :-) (I'm pleased to read that giving feedback gets easier with practice!)
You could consider hyphens in 'Neon-green', 'bubble-blowing', and 'well-groomed'... so that was only three places, haha. And only if you want them there, of course. There's been a general move away from this sort of usage in publishing during the last few years, as it's felt that readers don't need to see hyphens to understand what they're reading. I think that's true here.
You could consider hyphens in 'Neon-green', 'bubble-blowing', and 'well-groomed'... so that was only three places, haha. And only if you want them there, of course. There's been a general move away from this sort of usage in publishing during the last few years, as it's felt that readers don't need to see hyphens to understand what they're reading. I think that's true here.
Please note, I'm away at the moment because my partner is unwell and he requires a little extra TLC.