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Summer in Autumn
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10-23-2018, 09:57 PM
(10-23-2018, 11:23 AM)billy Wrote: where can I run to not to burn? this line works but made me do a double/treble take. and wasn't keen on the [o's] but that said, they didn't spoil the poem. i'm seeing more of your work in a different light; not that it wasn't good before, this feels like a different good.Could it be Where can I run to, not to burn? If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out |
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Summer in Autumn - by rowens - 10-23-2018, 07:38 AM
RE: Summer in Autumn - by billy - 10-23-2018, 11:23 AM
RE: Summer in Autumn - by Keith - 10-23-2018, 09:57 PM
RE: Summer in Autumn - by Thunderembargo - 10-23-2018, 09:50 PM
RE: Summer in Autumn - by rowens - 10-24-2018, 12:04 AM
RE: Summer in Autumn - by billy - 10-24-2018, 11:39 AM
RE: Summer in Autumn - by rowens - 10-24-2018, 11:44 AM
RE: Summer in Autumn - by billy - 10-25-2018, 11:10 AM
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