First Edit: Remoteness/September Snow
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Something like

my mittened fingers
enclosed

or even

my fingers mittened

might add to the sense of remoteness. Mittens have that roomy but unto itself image on their own.
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RE: Remoteness - by Todd - 10-02-2018, 10:23 PM
RE: Remoteness - by Richard - 10-03-2018, 08:57 AM
RE: Remoteness - by Keith - 10-10-2018, 01:59 AM
RE: Remoteness - by Richard - 10-10-2018, 11:38 AM
RE: Remoteness - by Knot - 10-13-2018, 07:51 PM
RE: Remoteness - by RiverNotch - 10-20-2018, 02:44 PM
RE: Remoteness - by ellajam - 10-20-2018, 08:25 PM
RE: Remoteness - by Richard - 10-20-2018, 11:10 PM
RE: Remoteness - by rowens - 10-22-2018, 05:44 AM
RE: Remoteness - by Richard - 10-22-2018, 06:58 AM
RE: First Edit: Remoteness/September Snow - by ellajam - 10-22-2018, 06:51 PM



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