10-21-2018, 01:20 PM
I've been sitting around writing these kinds of poems a lot lately. Autumn does it to me. Some are better than others. But they keep me going. I'm trying to read some of the latest poems here. Don't shut down before I can think of some reasonable critiques. . . . And, as for those two unnecessary lines, I think the second is the least necessary. But . . . They make their odd points, with my obsessions with melancholy Romanticism and religious faith and the beyonds of them.