After dinner naps
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2nd edit, thanks to Ally for the punctuation tips [the hyphens]

After Dinner Naps

I could smell cabbage on her breath.
A few green specks were glued to her pristine white peggies,
three of them like miniature tombstones spattered
with lichen, moss and slime.

A hefty burp exploded,
reinforcing the image of a small Shrek at a dinner table.
Neon-green sticky vomit projectiled over a toothy grin,
a satisfied toothy grin.
she/it put chubby inflated fingers to her mouth then played
patticake on my face.

My shirt cried a little as my bellybutton inhaled the moisture.
I retched a little as the bubble-blowing face
flopped onto my mouth
like she were trying to resuscitate me
with the gurgle of a sloppy kiss.
Gooey fists hit my ears,
wiped themselves in my well-groomed hair.

After a few splutters she rested,
her head lifeless on my shoulder,
seemingly devoid of neck bones or cartilage.
A wisp of breath brushed my ear
as a silent trump rustled her diaper.
I joined her soft snoozes with my own--
two happy dozing monsters.

1st EDIT After Dinner Naps; Thanks to all those who left feedback  Thumbsup

After Dinner Naps

I could smell cabbage on her breath.
A few green specks were glued to her pristine white peggies;
three of them like miniature tombstones spattered
with lichen, moss and slime.

A hefty burp exploded,
reinforcing the image of a small Shrek at a dinner table.
Neon green sticky vomit projectiled over a toothy grin,
a satisfied toothy grin.
she/it put chubby inflated fingers to her mouth then played
patticake on my face.

My shirt cried a little as my bellybutton inhaled the moisture.
I retched a little as the bubble blowing  face
flopped onto my mouth
like  she were trying to resuscitate me
with the gurgle of a sloppy kiss.
Gooey fists hit my ears,
wiped themselves in my well groomed hair.

After a few splutters she rested,
her head lifeless on my shoulder,
seemingly devoid of neck bones or cartilage.
A wisp of breath brushed my ear
as a silent trump rustled her diaper.
I joined her soft snoozes with my own--
two happy dozing monsters.

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Original: After Dinner Naps

I could smell cabbage on her breath.
A few large particles of it were glued on her pristine white peggies;
three of them like miniature marble tombstones spattered
with lichen, moss and slime.

A hefty burp exploded,
reinforcing the image of a small Shrek at a dinner table.
Neon green sticky vomit projectiled over a toothy grin,
a satisfied toothy grin.
she/it put chubby inflated fingers to her mouth then played
patticake on my face.

My shirt cried a little as my bellybutton inhaled the moisture.
I wretched a little as the bubble blowing  face
flopped onto my mouth
like  she were trying to resuscitate me
with the gurgle of a slit throat.
Gooey fists slapped my ears,
wiped themselves in my well groomed hair.

After a few splutters she rested,
her head lifeless on my shoulder,
seemingly devoid of neck bones or cartilage.
A wisp of breath brushed my ear
as a silent trump rustled her diaper.
I joined her soft snoozes with my own;
two happy dozing monsters.
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Messages In This Thread
After dinner naps - by billy - 10-21-2018, 12:38 PM
RE: After dinner naps - by dukealien - 10-21-2018, 10:16 PM
RE: After dinner naps - by billy - 10-22-2018, 07:59 AM
RE: After dinner naps - by Richard - 10-22-2018, 03:07 AM
RE: After dinner naps - by billy - 10-22-2018, 08:01 AM
RE: After dinner naps - by Knot - 10-22-2018, 10:58 PM
RE: After dinner naps - by Keith - 10-23-2018, 02:29 AM
RE: After dinner naps - by billy - 10-23-2018, 11:33 AM
RE: After dinner naps - by Keith - 10-23-2018, 03:32 PM
RE: After dinner naps - by billy - 10-24-2018, 12:07 PM
RE: After dinner naps - by Ally - 10-26-2018, 02:52 AM
RE: After dinner naps - by billy - 10-26-2018, 08:08 AM
RE: After dinner naps - by Ally - 10-27-2018, 03:29 AM
RE: After dinner naps - by billy - 10-28-2018, 10:24 AM
RE: After dinner naps - by Ally - 10-29-2018, 03:07 AM
RE: After dinner naps - by billy - 10-29-2018, 10:36 AM
RE: After dinner naps - by Thunderembargo - 10-29-2018, 11:10 PM
RE: After dinner naps - by Ally - 10-30-2018, 03:48 AM



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