One Star in Sight
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Hi rowens,

This is pretty haunting as billy states, with images like streetlit highways and old middle schools. There are a couple lines that seem unnecessary like S3L7 and S4L1, but other than that this is pretty well-written. Thank you for the read.

Best, Alex
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One Star in Sight - by rowens - 10-21-2018, 09:42 AM
RE: One Star in Sight - by billy - 10-21-2018, 11:43 AM
RE: One Star in Sight - by alonso ramoran - 10-21-2018, 12:23 PM
RE: One Star in Sight - by rowens - 10-21-2018, 01:20 PM



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