10-21-2018, 11:43 AM
well well well you bugger [bugger is more of an english word]
this is so unlike most of you're stuff rowens. it definitely has a haunting quality about it. lots of imagery and quietness. lots of original lines like [The breeze blows gently in voices] for me personally it's excellent poem. i like it maybe too much because i can't fault it. i suppose if i were forced to i could find something to point out but i'm not forced to and it works perfectly as is. thanks for the reads.
this is so unlike most of you're stuff rowens. it definitely has a haunting quality about it. lots of imagery and quietness. lots of original lines like [The breeze blows gently in voices] for me personally it's excellent poem. i like it maybe too much because i can't fault it. i suppose if i were forced to i could find something to point out but i'm not forced to and it works perfectly as is. thanks for the reads.