10-18-2018, 10:55 AM
the play on the couplet made me think twice so i read it a few more times and it works as a run in to the next stanza. i also like the the sharp ending. not keen on the title as i have no idea what it means 
enoyed the short poem though
enoyed the short poem though(10-17-2018, 10:10 PM)dukealien Wrote: Not Photometry
Whiteness is a way of being
you, too, can assume
(regardless of your plumbing,
pigment, socioeconomic
or genetic background)
if you’re good enough.