love the enjambment in L's 2 and 3, i also like the title, and the way it can be used for the first line. not seen anything in it i'd change. the interaction between dog and owner is perfect
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I May Have Raised My Voice
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I May Have Raised My Voice - by Tiger the Lion - 10-16-2018, 09:57 AM
RE: I May Have Raised My Voice - by billy - 10-16-2018, 11:08 AM
RE: I May Have Raised My Voice - by Keith - 10-17-2018, 03:41 PM
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