The house with a clock on its wall

[Keith]

This is wonderful - the details, the plot... tracking with closeups.  Very satisfying.

I'm wondering if "of" on L8 might be "off," but the line reads pretty well with "drops (of)" as a noun rather than "drops (off)" as a verb, too.

Has everything a story needs.  Excellent.

Thank you for the help on the "off" Duke, quick fixed it, you comments are greatly appreciated. Keith

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really enjoyed it Kieth. each line rand into the next without a hiccup.

Hi Billy, yes it is a bit rand thanks for reading and commenting. Best Keith