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First Edit: Remoteness/September Snow

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10-03-2018, 08:57 AM

Hey Todd,
Thanks for the feedback. As always, you gave me some useful suggestions to think about. I really like what you said about rearranging the first line/stanza because it got me thinking a little differently about this piece. I will give it some serious thought when I do an edit.

Thanks again,
Richard

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First Edit: Remoteness/September Snow - by Richard - 10-01-2018, 12:40 PM

RE: Remoteness - by Todd - 10-02-2018, 10:23 PM

RE: Remoteness - by Richard - 10-03-2018, 08:57 AM

RE: Remoteness - by Keith - 10-10-2018, 01:59 AM

RE: Remoteness - by Richard - 10-10-2018, 11:38 AM

RE: Remoteness - by Knot - 10-13-2018, 07:51 PM

RE: Remoteness - by RiverNotch - 10-20-2018, 02:44 PM

RE: Remoteness - by ellajam - 10-20-2018, 08:25 PM

RE: Remoteness - by Richard - 10-20-2018, 11:10 PM

RE: Remoteness - by rowens - 10-22-2018, 05:44 AM

RE: Remoteness - by Richard - 10-22-2018, 06:58 AM

RE: First Edit: Remoteness/September Snow - by ellajam - 10-22-2018, 08:13 AM

RE: First Edit: Remoteness/September Snow - by Richard - 10-22-2018, 09:27 AM

RE: First Edit: Remoteness/September Snow - by billy - 10-22-2018, 09:34 AM

RE: First Edit: Remoteness/September Snow - by Richard - 10-22-2018, 11:28 AM

RE: First Edit: Remoteness/September Snow - by ellajam - 10-22-2018, 06:51 PM

RE: First Edit: Remoteness/September Snow - by Knot - 10-22-2018, 10:24 PM

RE: First Edit: Remoteness/September Snow - by Richard - 10-23-2018, 07:35 AM

RE: First Edit: Remoteness/September Snow - by nozaki - 10-27-2018, 02:22 AM

RE: First Edit: Remoteness/September Snow - by Richard - 10-27-2018, 11:55 AM

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