10-02-2018, 03:20 PM
hi tiger
for me it's more a senryu than a haiku but it doesn't really matter. i like the wordplay and the depth of the last line. the apology can work two ways. sorry for flooding or sorry for being late. it has a childlike quality about it, [i mean that in a good way]
for me it's more a senryu than a haiku but it doesn't really matter. i like the wordplay and the depth of the last line. the apology can work two ways. sorry for flooding or sorry for being late. it has a childlike quality about it, [i mean that in a good way]
(08-22-2018, 07:37 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: tardy august rain
falls, and falls over itself
to apologize