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I automatically search for meaning in any given poem, I'm beginning to think that's a bad habit now.

ah, you won’t remember the sweet October when amber juice drips from the vines nice line
and where does the little grape picker go on that greenest afternoon I don't understand the conjugation with unrelated sentences

ah, the sea got stormy today a little random 

little girl, shrink midst the swollen grapes quickly interesting imagery but my mind can't digest these lines as the semantics are unintelligible
because the goats’ hooves sing, ah, a joyful god and his dusty entourage, 
and a green coluber, one with in the  sea of green 
ah, you won’t remember the  forget sweet October when you take a sip of juice I feel like repetition doesn't do any justice here

The imagery would benefit from a coherency and more fluent wording