09-24-2018, 09:35 AM
the questions feel to glib for socro, he formed his questions with more depth and understanding of the mind.
[do people say leaves are "always" green.] the questions you pose all have too simplistic an answer; "no one does" and the single line; everyone. the last line is probably the best but feels forced. for me the poem needs to fit that last line and make it less forced.
[do people say leaves are "always" green.] the questions you pose all have too simplistic an answer; "no one does" and the single line; everyone. the last line is probably the best but feels forced. for me the poem needs to fit that last line and make it less forced.
(04-24-2018, 10:45 PM)Cassiopeia88 Wrote: Who says that leaves are green
Or sky is blue?
Who says that days are always light
Or night is immanently dark?
Who says what anything is really like?
Who says I have to be like you?
Who says you have to be like me?
For your green may be my blue
My light may not be light for you
… and my colors change as seasons go.