09-15-2018, 08:15 AM
(09-13-2018, 03:12 AM)Keith Wrote: The aluminium ladder scrapesThe title is wonderful, the golden sun of memory seeps through the dust and fog of time [window], warped and faded, but somehow more real and brilliant than reality.
against the wall
and feeling small
I climb to my window.
The face of a young boy
greets me, staring through me,
watching with me.
It's been too hot for clothes,
the multi-coloured strips of PVC
stick to my back
keeping out the flies
as I run through them
into the garden.
The deckchairs are empty
remnants of a hot lost day,
wine glasses and a transistor radio
mark their sun trap.
The strip of lawn has been cut and edged,
border soil turned from
dry-grey to damp-black.
The cool of the shade
means the dog wants to play
as dad fills a bucket
for the car.
Mums in the kitchen
cold ham and thick butter on baguettes
asking who wants piccalilli?
I watch, as the small boy
shouts "me"
A nice timestamp with a hint of Shel Silverstein in there.
I enjoyed reading it.

