09-09-2018, 12:58 PM
Hi!
I gave it three read throughs...and i'm sorry to say, it just feels incomplete. I cant decipher what its trying to say...and I do normally love finding the hidden messages/puzzles with. So, I guess id suggest this; try adding 2 more stanzas - with your original intent in your mind - and see if you can make its message clearer.
Good Luck!
I gave it three read throughs...and i'm sorry to say, it just feels incomplete. I cant decipher what its trying to say...and I do normally love finding the hidden messages/puzzles with. So, I guess id suggest this; try adding 2 more stanzas - with your original intent in your mind - and see if you can make its message clearer.
Good Luck!
"Why do you suppose we only feel compelled to chase the ones who run away?" -Vicomte de Valmont, Dangerous Liasons