Edit 6: Longing

Edit 6: Longing

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08-06-2018, 04:01 AM

Hey guys,

Made another edit. There was a forum switch to mild/moderate critique so feel free to offer feedback on any flaws. There was a drastic change to the sonnet's verb tenses so I'd like to see how that worked for it.

Best, Alex

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Edit 6: Longing - by alonso ramoran - 07-08-2018, 12:51 PM

RE: Longing - by dukealien - 07-09-2018, 11:16 AM

RE: Longing - by alonso ramoran - 07-10-2018, 03:42 AM

RE: Longing - by RiverNotch - 07-16-2018, 12:02 AM

RE: Longing - by alonso ramoran - 07-18-2018, 03:35 AM

RE: Longing - by alonso ramoran - 07-22-2018, 03:05 PM

RE: Edit 2: Longing - by alonso ramoran - 08-06-2018, 04:01 AM

RE: Edit 2: Longing - by Leanne - 08-10-2018, 12:57 PM

RE: Edit 2: Longing - by alonso ramoran - 08-11-2018, 04:42 AM

RE: Edit 3: Longing - by alonso ramoran - 08-11-2018, 11:12 AM

RE: Edit 3: Longing - by alonso ramoran - 08-13-2018, 11:35 PM

RE: Edit 5: Longing - by nozaki - 09-01-2018, 11:26 AM

RE: Edit 5: Longing - by alonso ramoran - 09-07-2018, 04:20 AM

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