08-03-2018, 02:45 PM
I don't know how I missed this... I do enjoy a good challenge... By the way, I've enjoyed all the poems on napping, not an easy subject to rhyme one off about.
Unanswered Questions
Do you remember your naps last summer?
You didn't respond
to your name,
but knew you liked sleep.
Your name-
we argued about it for weeks,
you may never understand.
Do you remember your last nap?
A lonely day in March
when snow began to melt.
Your diagnosis months old,
but louder than Spring's promise
raging in the wind.
Unanswered Questions
Do you remember your naps last summer?
You didn't respond
to your name,
but knew you liked sleep.
Your name-
we argued about it for weeks,
you may never understand.
Do you remember your last nap?
A lonely day in March
when snow began to melt.
Your diagnosis months old,
but louder than Spring's promise
raging in the wind.
Time is the best editor.