07-10-2018, 11:41 AM
Hey nozaki,
Thanks for the feedback. I like you rewording suggestions and will give them some thought when I attempt another edit. I need to let this sit a bit longer before attempting another edit though.
rowens,
I completely get what you're saying. I think part of my struggle with this piece is that the entire image of a drunk embittered poet might be bordering on cliche, so I am trying to be careful with where I go with this.
Thanks again,
Richard
Thanks for the feedback. I like you rewording suggestions and will give them some thought when I attempt another edit. I need to let this sit a bit longer before attempting another edit though.
rowens,
I completely get what you're saying. I think part of my struggle with this piece is that the entire image of a drunk embittered poet might be bordering on cliche, so I am trying to be careful with where I go with this.
Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.