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Second Edit: To Emerging Poets

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06-25-2018, 01:59 AM

Hey rowens,
Thanks for the feedback. Some of your suggestions got me thinking about this, so I'm hoping that might lead to an edit some time soon. It seems like the ending needs some work based on all the critiques, so I might start there.

Thanks again,
Richard

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Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 06-15-2018, 11:15 AM

RE: To Emerging Poets - by Knot - 06-15-2018, 11:11 PM

RE: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 06-16-2018, 09:43 AM

RE: To Emerging Poets - by nozaki - 06-21-2018, 05:58 AM

RE: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 06-21-2018, 08:51 AM

RE: To Emerging Poets - by rowens - 06-24-2018, 10:47 PM

RE: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 06-25-2018, 01:59 AM

RE: First Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 06-25-2018, 11:30 AM

RE: First Edit: To Emerging Poets - by nozaki - 06-25-2018, 12:16 PM

RE: First Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Knot - 06-25-2018, 10:03 PM

RE: First Edit: To Emerging Poets - by rowens - 06-25-2018, 11:26 PM

RE: First Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 06-26-2018, 07:59 AM

RE: Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 07-01-2018, 10:24 AM

RE: Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by rowens - 07-01-2018, 11:37 PM

RE: Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 07-02-2018, 01:53 AM

RE: Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by rowens - 07-02-2018, 02:10 AM

RE: Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by nozaki - 07-05-2018, 12:08 PM

RE: Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 07-10-2018, 11:41 AM

RE: Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Knot - 07-10-2018, 10:10 PM

RE: Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 07-15-2018, 12:09 AM

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