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A Date

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06-23-2018, 05:33 AM

Kaos,

I would suggest that you go through your piece and re-work and remove any words and/or lines that are not absolutley needed. To much to read compared to what you are trying to convey

Thanks, Homer

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A Date - by kaos - 04-13-2018, 10:49 PM

RE: A Date - by Richard - 04-29-2018, 08:52 AM

RE: A Date - by alonso ramoran - 04-29-2018, 10:26 AM

RE: A Date - by homer1950 - 06-23-2018, 05:33 AM

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