06-15-2018, 12:55 AM
Hi Richard,
As always, thank you for your thoughtful critique. I don't think I was as clear in my first draft as I intended to be. There were pronoun, preposition, and adjective misuses/mistakes that I feel, if avoided, could've made the piece a lot more clear. Here is my revision.
Best, Alex
As always, thank you for your thoughtful critique. I don't think I was as clear in my first draft as I intended to be. There were pronoun, preposition, and adjective misuses/mistakes that I feel, if avoided, could've made the piece a lot more clear. Here is my revision.
Best, Alex