06-09-2018, 10:44 PM
Hi Radetof.
Honey Crisps
baffled by the title
A suggestion for layout:
Beauty demonstrated in flesh,
blood, a musky embrace,
a dying rasp. Eroded facts,
figures bask in the everlasting
sun. Creeping inside hollows;
a denial of instinct. Condemning
bells peal distantly. [S]uddenness
(is the 'sunburn'/'peeling' image intentional?)
and scale fail to satisfy.
Enjoyed the read.
Best, Knot.
Honey Crisps
baffled by the title
A suggestion for layout:
Beauty demonstrated in flesh,
blood, a musky embrace,
a dying rasp. Eroded facts,
figures bask in the everlasting
sun. Creeping inside hollows;
a denial of instinct. Condemning
bells peal distantly. [S]uddenness
(is the 'sunburn'/'peeling' image intentional?)
and scale fail to satisfy.
Enjoyed the read.
Best, Knot.

