Honey Crisps
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Hi Radetof.


Honey Crisps
baffled by the title


A suggestion for layout:

Beauty demonstrated in flesh,
blood, a musky embrace,

a dying rasp. Eroded facts,
figures bask in the everlasting

sun. Creeping inside hollows;
a denial of instinct. Condemning

bells peal distantly. [S]uddenness
(is the 'sunburn'/'peeling' image intentional?)
and scale fail to satisfy.


Enjoyed the read.


Best, Knot.
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Messages In This Thread
Honey Crisps - by Radetof.Yahska - 06-09-2018, 06:49 AM
RE: Honey Crisps - by Knot - 06-09-2018, 10:44 PM
RE: Honey Crisps - by nozaki - 06-11-2018, 10:41 PM
RE: Honey Crisps - by alonso ramoran - 06-12-2018, 12:40 PM
RE: Honey Crisps - by Radetof.Yahska - 06-14-2018, 03:50 AM
RE: Honey Crisps - by billy - 06-29-2019, 11:27 AM
RE: Honey Crisps - by churinga - 06-29-2019, 02:03 PM
RE: Honey Crisps - by Seraphim - 07-02-2019, 09:32 AM



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