06-03-2018, 08:08 PM
Well, the drapes are now open so maybe the coffee's on too, even though the feeling of the poem is that the N has not moved. Good morning in many ways. 
(06-03-2018, 12:35 AM)rowens Wrote: You'd want me to put coffee on
and open the drapes
That is what gives some interest:
You'd want me to . . .
but do I?
That kind of thing.
That, possibly typographical, intrusion into an otherwise straightforward stating.
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