05-31-2018, 10:27 PM
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Deep Black
Deep-black butterfly
flares in colors
white-light eyes
cannot see or name.
Black butterfly
thinks rainbow
has no soul.
@Tiger the Lion - excellent points, and escaping the sorta-haiku form allows the snippet to join the poem. BTW, I've found about five ways to read the snippet/V2, depending on where the implied punctuation is placed... four of them unintended and/or unexpected.
Deep Black
Deep-black butterfly
flares in colors
white-light eyes
cannot see or name.
Black butterfly
thinks rainbow
has no soul.
@Tiger the Lion - excellent points, and escaping the sorta-haiku form allows the snippet to join the poem. BTW, I've found about five ways to read the snippet/V2, depending on where the implied punctuation is placed... four of them unintended and/or unexpected.
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