05-28-2018, 05:26 AM
Well, that's the new version of the poem anyway. We were talking about the original.
Ok, I give you this one.
I would ask you to PM me if you wish to continue with the debate, since I would appreciate if someone else might have some comments (perhaps how to improve the poem stylistic-wise).
I don't have time now, but we can continue tomorrow.
Cheers
Ok, I give you this one.
I would ask you to PM me if you wish to continue with the debate, since I would appreciate if someone else might have some comments (perhaps how to improve the poem stylistic-wise).
I don't have time now, but we can continue tomorrow.
Cheers

