05-23-2018, 04:56 AM
Hey Richard=
My favorite part is the very end,
" follows me like a diagnosis in a permanent record"
?? "talking looks like an angry beehive" Talking should probably "sound" like an angry beehive, otherwise the confusion of senses seems like an acid trip.
It's been so long since I experienced a HS cafeteria that I can barely relate.
Tighten up the loose leaf and spill yer guts: after all, it's just lunch: "a photo of my parents in brain" tells me without showing me, and I want yer in-brain puke out on the table.
Just sayin,
Thanks.
Mark
My favorite part is the very end,
" follows me like a diagnosis in a permanent record"
?? "talking looks like an angry beehive" Talking should probably "sound" like an angry beehive, otherwise the confusion of senses seems like an acid trip.
It's been so long since I experienced a HS cafeteria that I can barely relate.
Tighten up the loose leaf and spill yer guts: after all, it's just lunch: "a photo of my parents in brain" tells me without showing me, and I want yer in-brain puke out on the table.
Just sayin,
Thanks.
Mark