Change (revised)

[Ryan_w_r]

I like the idea.. it’s a obvious hot topic and I enjoy topical pieces.. however I didn’t feel any passion behind your desire to make a change.. or how you may go about doing so. Which left me thinking you weren’t actually going to make a change. Keep writing, I don’t think you can take a soft approach with something like this. Focus some of that ammunition on how angry and frustrated you are. Show emotion. And be well.