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First Edit: My Apologies

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05-04-2018, 07:59 AM

Hey Knot,
Thanks for the feedback. I especially like your suggestion about the last line. Will give everything you said some thought.

Thanks again,
Richard

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First Edit: My Apologies - by Richard - 05-03-2018, 11:25 AM

RE: My Apologies - by Knot - 05-03-2018, 09:58 PM

RE: My Apologies - by Richard - 05-04-2018, 07:59 AM

RE: First Edit: My Apologies - by Richard - 05-04-2018, 11:49 AM

RE: First Edit: My Apologies - by Knot - 05-04-2018, 09:50 PM

RE: First Edit: My Apologies - by Todd - 05-04-2018, 11:09 PM

RE: First Edit: My Apologies - by Richard - 05-05-2018, 09:27 AM

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