Love / Hate

Love / Hate

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#11

04-18-2018, 08:01 AM

This is good. I like what cloud said about reversing the "hate you" and "love you" 's. Also maybe shorten in a little and focus on just a few feelings.

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Love / Hate - by TemporaryForever - 03-08-2018, 03:01 PM

RE: Love / Hate - by Purva Joshi - 03-08-2018, 03:40 PM

RE: Love / Hate - by cloud - 03-08-2018, 04:52 PM

RE: Love / Hate - by TemporaryForever - 03-09-2018, 02:20 PM

RE: Love / Hate - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 03-08-2018, 07:11 PM

RE: Love / Hate - by Todd - 03-09-2018, 07:49 AM

RE: Love / Hate - by Finnysta54 - 03-09-2018, 11:58 AM

RE: Love / Hate - by nibbed - 03-09-2018, 11:38 PM

RE: Love / Hate - by Pippa - 03-12-2018, 01:46 PM

RE: Love / Hate - by SpaceDirt - 03-30-2018, 07:47 AM

RE: Love / Hate - by wesliewilkin - 04-18-2018, 08:01 AM

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