04-12-2018, 10:42 AM
(04-09-2018, 11:29 AM)danny_ Wrote: Moon-hiding captivating titleHope this is useful
Little waves nudged our thighs - because your laying down or almost waist deep
'Don't go yet,' as we stepped nearer shore, I want to know whos quote this is
water draining off our bodies, running draining and running on the same line about the same thing, I'd pick one
down your smooth legs
orange from the fiery melting-wax the legs are orange, the water orange, everything orange from the sunset
sunset, and we crossed over dunes the first 'and'
on trails through sea-oats; I don't know what sea-oats are, seeds? Plants?
we were purple-blue on a side, the side which faces light? Or a general side
facing the light. And we found 'and' all the ands give a running feel that seems to only half care
an empty sun-burnt beach house
with a little door on a rusty spring. This is confusing, doors with springs or is this the feeling of the sunset, it's rusty and nearing springtime, I don't know
We hid inside
from the full and silver sand dollar and
moon rising, honored by its own reflection; I like the image though
we watched it through the gap
in the walls of the outdoor shower
perfectly too small for both of us, sounds like a fun Romantic evening
and it drew a glowing line vertically
through the steam, nice
from your ankle to your cheek - head to my soul I'm blown away
it knew we were there
but said nothing
so that we might hide, so warm hiding is like secret, it wouldn't the moon 'knowing' adds the forbidden touch,
in enveloping fog
and and
first embrace. This embrace sounds like a noun but also a verb and I think all the ands lose me in clarity despite the available ramble room for interpretation.
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches

