Something Old As New (Revision 2c)

[Knot]

As for the hands, I meant the cupping, blowing inside
part in S7. Don't think that would fit anywhere else
but that moment on the roof. Just seems like the
right time for that action. Since this aspect of the
poem is not a true experience, though, I can move it
if I find a way. :]

Or (with some slight modifications) it might be a way
of ending S4, a response to noticing 'fingertips'.


Best, Knot.