Something Old As New (Revision 2c)

[Knot]

Hey danny,
it's NaPM and that tends to be a big distraction.
Happens everywhere, apparently.

Suggestion on S1 - fair enough.
Though I saw it more as following
on from the 'sun' and the 'branches'
than the 'house'.

As to the 'hands',
by way of food for thought:
We never got inside,
only peered into dark rooms,
Your careful hands on the back door -
I focused there, rotating the lens:
chipping white paint
(you could add a bit more detail here,
given 'focused')
and your fingertips in the light.


Best, Knot.