Before the Cooks Arrive (Revision 1)

[danny_]

Good points. Not sure I want to change charred.
It may be hard to imagine if you've never seen it,
which puts me at a disadvantage for sure.
There's so much grease it's genuinely hugging
the backs of stoves like a blanket; also, because of
the heat it has a charred skin. You would think the
place should have burned down after seeing that.
If you can think of a better way to express that
let me know. The other points you made are
definitely useful.

^ I've adopted your line-break style messages...
Testing, anyway. I know on wide screens the
text goes miles this way >>> before a break.