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Something Old As New (Revision 2c)

Something Old As New (Revision 2c)
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04-09-2018, 08:23 AM
Revision 2c

- fixed issues with yellow snow Wink
- fixed using "door" twice
- tightened up ending into one stanza
- a few vocab adjustments
- applied great suggestion from Knot on S6

Still room for improvement but getting closer to satisfied Smile
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Something Old As New (Revision 2c) - by danny_ - 03-30-2018, 08:20 AM
RE: Something Old As New - by Richard - 03-30-2018, 11:41 AM
RE: Something Old As New - by danny_ - 03-30-2018, 01:20 PM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 1) - by Knot - 03-30-2018, 10:18 PM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 1) - by danny_ - 03-31-2018, 12:43 AM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 2) - by danny_ - 04-01-2018, 06:49 AM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 2) - by Knot - 04-02-2018, 12:00 AM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 2) - by danny_ - 04-02-2018, 01:00 AM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 2b) - by Knot - 04-06-2018, 10:08 PM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 2c) - by danny_ - 04-09-2018, 08:23 AM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 2c) - by Knot - 04-09-2018, 09:37 PM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 2c) - by Knot - 04-10-2018, 01:33 AM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 2c) - by Knot - 04-11-2018, 09:13 PM



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