Eggs

Eggs

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04-09-2018, 07:04 AM

Hi therabbitisme, thanks for the good feedback. I agree about the last line but also glad you caught the intention. I was curious about how the repetitive style would be received, I am a sucker for it sometimes. Good suggestion for the ending, I will revise with that in mind.

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Eggs - by danny_ - 04-01-2018, 07:19 AM

RE: Eggs - by just mercedes - 04-01-2018, 08:40 AM

RE: Eggs - by therabbitisme - 04-09-2018, 06:46 AM

RE: Eggs - by danny_ - 04-09-2018, 07:04 AM

RE: Eggs - by abu nuwas - 04-11-2018, 05:02 AM

RE: Eggs - by danny_ - 04-11-2018, 06:31 AM

RE: Eggs - by abu nuwas - 04-12-2018, 04:32 AM

RE: Eggs - by danny_ - 04-12-2018, 06:43 AM

RE: Eggs - by abu nuwas - 04-12-2018, 09:00 AM

RE: Eggs - by danny_ - 04-12-2018, 09:39 AM

RE: Eggs - by abu nuwas - 04-12-2018, 11:13 AM

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