Eggs

[therabbitisme]

This was a pretty fun read, definitely fulfilling the role of "just for fun". Your imagery is pretty solid and engaging. I think the last line "and how good they are." is a bit too trivial of a conclusion. The poem basically builds up to this description, and while a juxtaposingly brief description is great for effect, this one came as a disappointment rather than an appreciated misdirection. I'd love if it was a one-line summary of the taste using a very trivial metaphor. Very nice poem overall, I like this style a lot.