04-07-2018, 09:55 AM
Thanks Knot,
Very good critique, many I will use. The title was a bit of a play on words, as the day is "April Fool's Day" and people tend to shout "April Fool's" when a prank is pulled. In the poem, this incorporates a bit of irony; showing that both people involved are fools: as the poem goes on to explicate.
Dale
Very good critique, many I will use. The title was a bit of a play on words, as the day is "April Fool's Day" and people tend to shout "April Fool's" when a prank is pulled. In the poem, this incorporates a bit of irony; showing that both people involved are fools: as the poem goes on to explicate.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.