Something Old As New (Revision 2c)

[danny_]

Thank you Knot, I'll give those comments some thought. (Now why did you have to go and rhyme with thought?) .. I do want to avoid 'old' and 'door' repeating, and 'wet our jeans' I never considered being like ... that... lol. Shame, thank you. Might need to go back to knees. I kind of want to keep a rhyme, we'll see. Your final thoughts I'll have to definitely consider. I'm somewhat inclined to keep as is, but maybe could fortify it a bit.