Something Old As New (Revision 2c)

[danny_]

Thanks for your time, Alex! It's good you didn't read replies first. Generally I like to hear the same comments more than once - it's that much more likely there is an issue with that part of the poem.

You're the first to like the title. Something old can become new in a way. The only thing it lacks is tying into the relationship of the couple. I may have a solution though.

Many good points you made, some of which I'd already been debating, and I appreciate your positive comments too! Glad to know it was a pleasant read.