I'm Fine

[SpaceDirt]

I enjoy the aesthetics of your lines, truly

I keep it hidden, boiling, festering 
Melting away my soul. 'away' is decent, but it's a stylistic choice 
Finally, I succumb. hmm, too sudden acceptance for something which is melting one's soul
It's been going on forever, and it will 
Never goes away. 
you could have ended it here, or not, it wouldn't have left much of an impact either way.

Everybody knows, but I still say it. uhm, so what?
I think this ending is too arbitrary compared to the rest, & it would be better left out. A misdirection can be a good way to end, but this left me with more questions than answers to what "it" could be.

Nice read, I reckon if you keep at it, by the time you're 20, you'll be an awesome poet

Thanks. I guess though the "it" that you're referring to is given by the first letter of each line, and that's why I included it.