I'm Fine
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(This is my first poem posted here, and is the first in a series of acrostics that I may or may not continue. Any thoughts are welcome, as I'm only 15 and still working on writing).

I keep it hidden, boiling, festering
Melting away my soul.
Finally, I succumb.
It's been going on forever, and it will
Never go away.

Everybody knows, but I still say it.
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Messages In This Thread
I'm Fine - by SpaceDirt - 03-31-2018, 06:58 AM
RE: I'm Fine - by cloud - 03-31-2018, 11:30 AM
RE: I'm Fine - by SpaceDirt - 03-31-2018, 12:13 PM
RE: I'm Fine - by Bmce - 04-05-2018, 11:05 PM
RE: I'm Fine - by danny_ - 04-06-2018, 01:22 PM
RE: I'm Fine - by rowens - 04-07-2018, 05:40 AM
RE: I'm Fine - by therabbitisme - 04-09-2018, 04:14 AM
RE: I'm Fine - by deadpoetsvariety - 04-10-2018, 04:25 AM
RE: I'm Fine - by TemporaryForever - 04-14-2018, 03:51 AM
RE: I'm Fine - by danny_ - 04-14-2018, 06:41 AM
RE: I'm Fine - by Guy Farmer - 02-08-2019, 04:23 PM
RE: I'm Fine - by JkArcher - 02-14-2019, 07:55 PM



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