03-30-2018, 01:20 PM
Thank you Richard
First, defenses!
- The title - something old as new: it is new because it is seen in a new way, by those careful, compassionate photographers, creating art.
- Old houses don't always mean entirely taken over by nature. They are between abandoned and decrepit. I could possibly convey that, though.
And thank-yous:
- The first line has been shaped up.
- The red shutters may not have been important anyway, removed the line for now.
- "feet" is better than "footsteps"
- and the wire!! not sure if it's what you had in mind, but it gave me a brilliant idea. (okay, it actually gave me a wonderful opportunity.)
- a few other things.
I'll post a revision. Thanks again
First, defenses!
- The title - something old as new: it is new because it is seen in a new way, by those careful, compassionate photographers, creating art.
- Old houses don't always mean entirely taken over by nature. They are between abandoned and decrepit. I could possibly convey that, though.
And thank-yous:
- The first line has been shaped up.
- The red shutters may not have been important anyway, removed the line for now.
- "feet" is better than "footsteps"
- and the wire!! not sure if it's what you had in mind, but it gave me a brilliant idea. (okay, it actually gave me a wonderful opportunity.)
- a few other things.
I'll post a revision. Thanks again
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