Something Old As New (Revision 2c)
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Thank you Richard

First, defenses! Smile
- The title - something old as new: it is new because it is seen in a new way, by those careful, compassionate photographers, creating art.
- Old houses don't always mean entirely taken over by nature. They are between abandoned and decrepit. I could possibly convey that, though.

And thank-yous:
- The first line has been shaped up.
- The red shutters may not have been important anyway, removed the line for now.
- "feet" is better than "footsteps"
- and the wire!! not sure if it's what you had in mind, but it gave me a brilliant idea. (okay, it actually gave me a wonderful opportunity.)
- a few other things.

I'll post a revision. Thanks again
"The best way out is always through."-Robert Frost
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Messages In This Thread
Something Old As New (Revision 2c) - by danny_ - 03-30-2018, 08:20 AM
RE: Something Old As New - by Richard - 03-30-2018, 11:41 AM
RE: Something Old As New - by danny_ - 03-30-2018, 01:20 PM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 1) - by Knot - 03-30-2018, 10:18 PM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 1) - by danny_ - 03-31-2018, 12:43 AM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 2) - by danny_ - 04-01-2018, 06:49 AM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 2) - by Knot - 04-02-2018, 12:00 AM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 2) - by danny_ - 04-02-2018, 01:00 AM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 2b) - by Knot - 04-06-2018, 10:08 PM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 2c) - by Knot - 04-09-2018, 09:37 PM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 2c) - by Knot - 04-10-2018, 01:33 AM
RE: Something Old As New (Revision 2c) - by Knot - 04-11-2018, 09:13 PM



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