First Edit: No Such Things as Happy Endings

First Edit: No Such Things as Happy Endings

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03-30-2018, 10:57 AM

Hey Danny,
Thanks for the feedback. You gave me ideas to think about, especially in regards to the additions I made to this poem. I was unsure about the "I was wrong" line, so greatly appreciate the thoughts there.

Thanks again,
Richard

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First Edit: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-11-2018, 05:07 AM

RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 03-11-2018, 05:49 AM

RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-11-2018, 06:27 AM

RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by nibbed - 03-11-2018, 01:52 PM

RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-13-2018, 07:27 AM

RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Knot - 03-14-2018, 01:19 AM

RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-14-2018, 02:07 AM

RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Fatman Butter - 03-22-2018, 05:02 PM

RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by HersheyKiss - 03-22-2018, 10:44 PM

RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-24-2018, 08:04 AM

RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by danny_ - 03-28-2018, 01:49 PM

RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-28-2018, 10:03 PM

RE: First Edit: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-30-2018, 03:49 AM

RE: First Edit: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by danny_ - 03-30-2018, 09:38 AM

RE: First Edit: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-30-2018, 10:57 AM

RE: First Edit: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Knot - 03-30-2018, 10:22 PM

RE: First Edit: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-31-2018, 12:17 AM

RE: First Edit: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by danny_ - 03-31-2018, 01:03 AM

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